Monday, October 1, 2012

Short Story


My mom’s favorite story to tell everyone about me is my cell phone story. It started when I was at the  Fall Festival a couple years ago. It had just stopped raining really hard and my friends and I decided to walk outside. Then all of a sudden I saw my friend Kristen come up another way. She ran towards me to give me a hug and jumped. We both collapsed into a big pile of water and my phone got soaked. We were both laughing so hard we had no idea my phone was broken. So when I got home I asked my parents what I should do to get the water out of my phone. They told me to put it in rice and it will absorb the water. Me, being a “dumb blonde”, went into the kitchen and started boiling water for the rice. Just as I was about to put the rice in my mom came in. She asked what I was doing. I told her that I was making rice to put my phone in. She started laughing so hard. She told me that I have to put it in uncooked rice. Every time my family and I hear this story we all laugh so much!!!





I think that this story is good because its something that happened with so much innocence. I didn't even think about if what i was doing made sense. It has the good ingredients of a good story too. It has humor, an exciting conflict, and a solution at the end. I chose this story because its something that I feel describes me. I do somethings that are very not smart sometimes. In my opinion a good story is something that can either make you laugh or really get you to think about it. 


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